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The issue of Ultimate Grappling Magazine with my article is out. It is kind of interesting to see the changes it went through.

I wrote the article and then shared it with Rhadi Fergusson who added some of his own spin on it. Then he shipped it to the editor who slashed at it a bit. The changes are interesting – and not necessarily all for the better. I think the magazine editor was focused on cutting the size of the article. Rhadi added some stuff about his commercial empire. Oh well, I guess editors are like auditors, they have to find something – otherwise they can’t say they are working.

Original article:  Download predator_or_prey.doc

What Rhadi sent to the editor: Download predator_or_prey_rhadi.doc

The final version is out in hard-copy for purchase, but isn’t on-line yet. Here is the link to the magazine:   http://www.ultimategrapplingmag.com/